The lost Princess

Story of a Princess and her tragic and empowering adventures. Work in Progress and open for suggestions. I got down 20 Pages or till chapter 10 in German and i am translating an finessing at the moment. Chapters 1-9 are released for a first read and feedback. Released chapter 10 not quit sure if its final do. Had quite a epiphany dreaming up characters and places and will write a plot for them in oncoming chapters.
  Wow i got so sidetracked by inventing a crazy religion i forgot to write the bio of the cardinals brother thats actually in the plot, maybe its to out of the box for the plot.